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This Song Saved My Life

[chapter 3]

{Blade's P.O.V}

Today went by unually fast for me, I'm not used to having well good days, I'm guessing it's because I've been pretty much hanging out with Zeth all day, I'm still not used to his hyper cheerfullness. I was leaning against the school building that Avril walked into with Zeth sitting next to me doing his homework, "So how'd you like your first day?" I asked him, he shrugged "It was alright besides the mean creepy looking math teacher." "I'm with you on that, that old bat is mean and creepy no wonder everyone hates her." He looked up from his homework and looked at me "That was a woman!?" I couldn't help but smile slightly "You didn't know that?" "No! She looks and sounds like a guy! I swear she sounds like my grandpa." I laughed "That's what I thought too when I first saw her." "Benji!" I turned around to see Avril running towards me and hugged "Hey Avril, how was school?" I asked hugging her back "It was awesome!" she said in a cheerful tone, she let go of me and turned around towards Zeth and smiled "Oh hi!" he smiled back "Hey, you must be Avril, I'm Zeth." I heard Avril giggle "Yup! I'm Avril and it's nice to meet you Zeth." "You too maybe the three of us could hang out sometime." Avril quickly spun around "Can we please?" I hesitated a bit, I haven't decided if I should trust Zeth or not since I just met him today but then again, he was pretty cool I guess I could trust him, I shrugged and said "I don't see why not." Avril smiled and literally started jumping up and down like she was on a sugar high "You think we can hang out with him this weekend?" "That's if it's ok with him, Avril." I turned my attention over to Zeth "what do you think?" he shrugged "It's alright with me it's not like I'm busy or anything." "This weekend it is!" Avril chimed in cheerfully me and Zeth both chuckled and the three of us walked out from the school enterance. We walked down the sidewalk talking until Zeth had to cross the street and walk through an alley to get home, I realized he lives about four blocks from our hell. I walked slowly beside Avril prepairing for whatever it was that was gonna make this first good day go down hill, I wish everyday could be like this one but we all know that life is a fucking bitch.
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I finally finished the third chapter god writing stories is hard HOW DO AUTHORS DO THIS!?! I'm a crappy writer o.o lol next chapter is gonna be Zeth's P.O.V I'm gonna try my best with it so until then enjoy! 8D

characters and story (c) me
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~mpavao7 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome chapter! :D

I also have a bit of advice, try hitting the enter key when you start dialogue, it makes it easier to read :)
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~snowbelltherabbit Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks ^^

ok I'll try that from now on :meow:
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~mpavao7 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
np!

Okay ^^
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~snowbelltherabbit Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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~mpavao7 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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~snowbelltherabbit Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hey you think you can help me start off the next chapter? .-.
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~mpavao7 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay
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~snowbelltherabbit Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok Imma send you a note since I don't wanna cause any spoilers
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